I am rooted on the bottom of an ocean teeming with life
The fish float by, mass produced and plastic
They breathe deep the water pumped in from
China, India, Mexico and Japan
Nothing is local, Nothing is wholesome
They float, and I stay anchored deep in the muck and slime
Longing for the taste of pine wood air
For blue skies and white peppered nights
Their hum is a nail in my hand
Their greed is a bullet in my brain
I see the Pac Sun Fish, tattooed a deep purple, black and red
I smell the Hollister Fish, dripping with artificial pheromones
I hear the Abercrombie Fish singing boom boom crash boom
I taste the sick, bitter taste of Excess as it swims by
I feel shame, deep, burning and rooted
Rage against the Machine!
ReplyDeleteI think if you had added one line between the "I taste" and "I feel" lines...one that starts with "I touch"...then the "I feel" would have been a perfect finishing line. As written it's good, but I don't finish the read smoothly.